學測寫信兩段式規範作文(54)-Two revolutionary Product to Choose 挑選兩項之一即將上市之新科技產品By David Pai (白正為)

 學測寫信兩段式規範作文(54)-

Two revolutionary Product to Choose 挑選兩項之一即將上市之新科技產品

By David Pai (白正為)

學測寫信兩段式規範作文-

挑選兩項之一即將上市之新科技產品Two revolutionary Product to Choose 

By David Pai

二、英文作又(占20分)

說明:依提示寫一篇英文作文,文長至少120個單詞(words)

提示:以下有兩項即將上市之新科技產品:

1.健康食物標(Healthy Food Labeling)

隨著時間,標籤根據食物的狀況自己改變顏色。透過視覺就能知道食物是否可食用,如果標籤是綠色,代表食品依舊新鮮可食,仍在保存期限內可供食用,如果標是紅色,則代表食物本身可能已變質

2.聲波滅火器(Sound-wave Etinquisher)

透過無人機發射聲波可以阻擋火焰中的氧氣傳導,當頻率正確,火勢就能被撲滅。這樣的滅火器可以加速消防隊員或是直升機滅火的工作效率,且這樣的滅火器不會有過期的問題。

如果明年其中一項產品確定會上市,你會希望哪一項產品能先上市?請以此為主题,寫一篇至少120個詞的英文作文。文分兩段,第一段說明你的選擇及理由。第二段舉例說明未來這項產品將如何使用以及會帶來什麼改變。

IF both new revolutionary hi-tech  hit the market next year, I,without doubt, will pick the one on the left ,which ,with artificail intelligence in my eye, can tell the consumer the freshness level  by changing color label.The reason for me to  select it for is as follows:

For the first, compared to the smart extinquisher (SE )on the right,Health Food Labeling is more concerned with our daily life as we have to eat every day ,and healthy body is all time in earlier priority than anything else;however, we may not need SE all life or so urgently because it is just in case. Then,in terms of application  effiency,Healthy Food Labeling (HFL )can easily beat the SE as it is simple to use without any  complications  while the latter require thee sound outsiders,such as fire fighters’s involement and its equipment to make the product sound. Last, for CP value in ‘dollar-effective’, I personaaly believe  HFL take the edge

I think HFL as its name suggest will stick to its outer package as an indicator.And there will be a changing letter with”R” or “G” for “red”and “green” appearing or to appear along with forward time horizon.This is for minor color-blinds.This labeling will repel the poor quality product and manufacturers out of market,guaranteeing food secuity in high standard. Therefore people may expand their life span obviously. Besides,it help people know in advance how to store their food in more appropiate way,and mange their food budget,and storage budget and producing  and delivery date.This is good for ecomic develment.Even so, there is no perfect product in the world. For example , if the male ingredients are added into the food ,the sticker still has its blind spot.It is expected to expand its fuction beside detecting the freshness.In a nutshell,HFl is an life-saving technology in civilization advance

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IF both new revolutionary hi-tech  hit the market next year, I,without doubt, will pick the one on the left ,which ,with artificail intelligence in my eye, can tell the consumer the freshness level  by changing color label.The reason for me to  select it for is as follows:

如果明年兩款新的革命性高科技都上市，毫無疑問，我會選擇左邊的那個，在我看來，它可以通過改變顏色標籤來告訴消費者新鮮度。我選擇它的原因如下：

For the first, compared to the smart extinquisher (SE )on the right,Health Food Labeling is more concerned with our daily life as we have to eat every day ,and healthy body is all time in earlier priority than anything else;however, we may not need SE all life or so urgently because it is just in case. Then,in terms of application  effiency,Healthy Food Labeling (HFL )can easily beat the SE as it is simple to use without any  complications  while the latter require thee sound outsiders,such as fire fighters’s involement and its equipment to make the product sound. Last, for CP value in ‘dollar-effective’, I personaaly believe  HFL take the edge

首先，與右邊的智慧滅火器（SE）相比，健康食品標籤更關聯我們的日常生活，因為我們每天都要吃東西，健康的身體比其他任何事情都更重要;但是，我們可能一輩子不需要SE或那麼緊迫，因為它只是以防萬一。然後，在應用效率方面，健康食品標籤（HFL）可以很容易地擊敗SE，因為它使用簡單而沒有任何牽連的事物，而後者需要健全功能的局外人，如消防員的參與及其設備才能使產品圓滿。最後，對於“美元有效”的CP值，我個人認為HFL佔據優勢

I think HFL as its name suggest will stick to its outer package as an indicator.And there will be a changing letter with”R” or “G” for “red”and “green” appearing or to appear along with forward time horizon.This is for minor color-blinds.This labeling will repel the poor quality product and manufacturers out of market,guaranteeing food secuity in high standard. Therefore people may expand their life span obviously. Besides,it help people know in advance how to store their food in more appropiate way,and mange their food budget,and storage budget and producing  and delivery date.This is good for ecomic develment.Even so, there is no perfect product in the world. For example , if the male ingredients are added into the food ,the sticker still has its blind spot.It is expected to expand its fuction beside detecting the freshness.In a nutshell,HFl is an life-saving technology in civilization advance

我認為HFL顧名思義將附著於其外部包裝作為指標簽。並且將有一個不斷變化的字母，其中“紅色”和“綠色”的“R”或“G”字與前向時間範圍一起出現。這有用於少數的色盲人。這種標籤將把劣質產品及製造商趕出市場，保證食品在高標準下的安全性。因此，人們可能會明顯延長他們的壽命。此外，它還可以幫助人們提前瞭解如何以更合適的方式儲存食物，並管理他們的食物預算，儲存預算和生產和交貨日期。這對經濟發展是有好處的。即便如此，世界上也沒有完美的產品。例如，如果將不好成分添加到食物中，貼紙仍然有其盲點。我們期待除了檢測新鮮度外，它還能擴大其功能。簡而言之，HFl是文明進步的救生科技。